vox nihili

One suggestion: more variation of the wording. It's a sweet rhyme, but as Juniper pointed out, it's also quite short. And love poems are of course, ubiquitous. Maybe a fresh ...

I've got one question: what happened? Sorry, I'm just in suspense mode. I'm itching for an elaboration! A longer poem that's a little more specific? You've got me hooked. The ...

I love the sometimes gentle, sometimes intense wording in this piece. But I really don't get what's going on here. Maybe that's just me. ;) Probably is just me.... It's ...

Okay, here comes the army of red pens. Sorry, I just had to say that. ;) Don't take the crit hard, please, it's just what we do here. I'm going ...

Here goes nothing. I'm writing this based loosely on an experience of my own... yuck yuck yuck... though in some ways, mine was not quite as dramatic. .................... "Sasha!" A ...

As I write them, my characters believe they are absolutely real. I try to keep the emotional responses, especially, in spectrum to the situation. I give them reasons for their ...

OMG! I have a story in which amnesia is pretty much the whole plot. Glad to be able to help you with this. Okay, first off, complete amnesia in real ...

Suspension, possibly for a year. He would ride home with his parents. He might also be given criminal charges and arrested during or after the act by the school 'resource ...

The reason I am posting this is because of my personal disgust over the "Tourette's Guy" videos on youtube. If you have seen these, supposedly 'comical' film clips, you will ...

I'm not deaf, and haven't met any Deaf people to my knowledge. Though my grandmother could be called Hard of Hearing. In my opinion, it is wonderful that people with ...

Here's my take: example: my grandfather had worn-out lungs, pretty much, and he was dying, though he didn't let us know until that very day. He chose to have a ...

So it doesn't make sense evolutionarily... It's not what I consider to be 'natural' but then again, everyone has their beliefs. I don't think it's natural, but I'm not going ...

HI again. This is a poem I did this year. And as I always say,read, comment, check, review, correct if necessary. I'd really like some help with this poem. (It's ...

Thanks for the review! I added a little bit more emotion... Hope it holds up. ; ) I don't generally do tragedies...well, I do irony, but not as much tragedy. ...

Here's the second installation. I've worked hard on it. For the first segment, click on the link at the top or the link in my signature. I'm able to say, ...